高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

I live in a very beauty spot , there is green trees in our town. there are many fishes in the river. the house are very old and the street is very narrow. the people is working everyday, but we are still very poor. now, there are many tall buildings and the ad. is everywhere. many cares covered the street. but the woods and the fishes are less and less. because the industry break the environment. so it is very important to reduce the pollution.