2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；可适当增加从句的使用；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Computer and Man As time goes by,more and more people have computer. But it lead to lots of problems between computer and man. On the one hand, computer can improve our life. It makes us convenient. We can search what we want to know in computer. On the another hand, lots of people are put theirselves in computer games. They play computer games all day and all night. As far as I am concerned, we should use computer make us improve.