2008年高考英语作文真题附范文(山东卷):给同学写信

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Dear all: Hello, everybody. My name is Li Hong. I'm 14 years old now. I like drawing. In my spare time, I like going on a picinic and drawing planets in the nature. It's also great to listen to the birds. Their voicis are beautiful. My favourite subject is Science and I want to be a scientist when I grow up. I'm glad to take part in the activity and I hope that we can be good friends here.