作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Dear all: How are you. My name is Li Hong and I'm 14 years old now. I'm come from Nanjing. I like drawing. In my spare time, I like going on a picnic and drawing planets in nature. It's also great to listen to the birds. Their voicis are beautiful. My favourite subject is Science and I want to be a scientist when I grow up. I'm glad to take part in the activity and I hope that we can be good friends here.