2008年高考英语作文真题附范文(山东卷):给同学写信

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Dear all: How are you. My name is Li Hong and I'm 14 years old now. I'm come from Nanjing. I like drawing. In my spare time, I like going on a picnic and drawing some plants in nature. It's also great to listen to the song of birds. Their voices are beautiful. My favourite subject is Science and I want to be a scientist when I grow up. I'm glad to take part in the activity and I hope that we can be good friends here.