文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
Dear Mr Green: I want to find a tutor, but I don't know which one to choose. I'm writing to ask for your help. I want to find a beautiful woman teacher. She must be a primary or junior school teacher and a college student is also Ok. The teacher's age should be about 20 to 25. She may have some hobbies like reading and trarelling and she should be a warm-hearted and patient woman. The most important thing is that she speaks standard English, know about English History and Geography. Thanks a lot for your help. Yours Tony