作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Dear Mr Green: I want to find a tutor, but I don't know which one to choose. I'm writing to ask for your help. I want to find a woman teacher who are beautiful and kind. She must be a primary or junior school teacher and a college student is also all right. The teacher's age should be about 20 to 25. She may have hobbies like reading and travelling and she should be a warm-hearted and patient woman. The most important thing is that she speaks standard English, know about English History and Geography. Thanks a lot for your help. Yours Tony