2008年高考英语作文真题附范文(山东卷):给同学写信

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Dear Mr Green: I want to find a tutor, but I don't know which one to choose. I'm writing to ask for your help. I want to find a woman teacher who are beautiful and kind. She must be a primary or junior school teacher and a college student is also all right. The teacher's age should be about 20 to 25. She may have some hobbies like reading and travelling and she should be a warm-hearted and patient woman. The most important thing is that she speaks standard English and knows about English History and Geography. Thanks a lot for your help. Yours, Tony.