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Some advice for travelling I think the best place to visit is XuanWuLake. The lake is beautiful and you can see beautiful flowers and enjoy great views there. Zhong Shan Ling is also a good place to visit. You can learn about Sun Zhong Shan and History of China. It's great to visit Zi Jing Mountain to relax yourselves. During your trip, you should remember to pay attention to your own safety. There are always many people in these places and you should protect your bags and momey carefully, so that you can enjoy a wonderful trip. I hope these steps and do you a favor.
