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希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Mary is an American girl with a round face. She has golden hair and blue eyes. She looks very beautiful. Mary does well in English and always helps us to practise speaking English. She has a good sense of humour. She is generous and always willing to share things with us and makes us very happy. She is very interested in Chinese. But she can’t speak it well. We’ll try our best to help her with her Chinese. For example, We often talk with her in Chinese after class and teach her to say correct Chinese words.
