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正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
Mary is an American girl with a round face. She has golden hair and blue eyes. She looks very beautiful. Mary does well in English and always helps us to practise speaking English. She has a good sense of humour and alwys makes us happy. She is generous enough to share things with us many times. She is very interested in Chinese. But she can’t speak it well. We’ll try our best to help her with her Chinese. For example, We often talk with her in Chinese after class and teach her to say correct Chinese words.
