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简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
Mary is an American girl with a round face. She has golden hair and blue eyes. She looks very beautiful. Mary does well in English and always helps us to practise speaking English. She has a good sense of humour and always makes us happy. She is generous. She is very interested in Chinese. But she can’t speak it well. We’ll try our best to help her with her Chinese. For example, We often talk with her in Chinese after class and teach her to say correct Chinese words.
