2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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We use computer everday,and it can help us to do many things.Recently,it's a very hot topic about the computer and man.That is the computer can do more complex things than man.Is the computer more clever than man?My idea just like below. First,the computer can do complex tasks.It is controled by man.The progress is designed by man.The working process of the computer is mode the human brain's working.So ,it is not clever than man. second,the computer is a very good assistant to man.It can count many times in a second.It can do something that man can't do.But man can't depend on computer completely. In conclusion,computer can help man.Man need learn how to use computer in a right way.