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Mary is an American girl with a round face. She has golden hair and blue eyes. She looks very beautiful. Mary does well in English and always helps us to practise speaking English. She has a good sense of humour and always makes us happy. She is generous. She likes sharing things with her classmates. By the way, she is very interested in Chinese. But she can’t speak it well. We’ll try our best to help her with her Chinese. For example, We will talk with her in Chinese after class and teach her to say correct Chinese words.