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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33562
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇的使用还需加强。

用户练习作文:

Different person may have different opinions towards this question.As for me,I really believe that if a customer consume like this,he is really not a wise consumer.Maybe this is not just for the student,but for all the people.Reasoning opinions will be at the following paragraph. Firstly,a successful business usually means that a business has a lager amount of shoppers and their turn over are very high.So in order to become the main leader in a market,many companies make every afforts to attract the consumers to buy their products.Making a discount or the price will lower if the consumers are in a proper amount are always the tricks of the company.Secondly,what we see sometimes is not ture actually.Maybe you collect all kinds of conpons in order to make next time cheaper,in fact,what you have bought was in a higher price than it was.As is known to all,every business benifits the company most.There is naturally that they will improve their income by using such kind of tricks. In short,a smart consumer will less be cheated by such tricks.Thinking about the product itself is very important.However,I don't mean that everyone should aviod the discount or refuse to collect the coupons.To balance the quality and the price of the product is the proper way to make you a smart consumer,too.

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