作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
Dear classmate: Hearing you are not full of confidence in learning English,I am a little worry. English is an important subject,and as an official language it deserves more effort. In the future, it will always appear in our life.So,it's about time you stopped slacking off and did some work. And I will tell you some ways about how to learn English. First,you should make sure that nothing could divert you attention when you are studying.Second,you should read more and write more.Third students' autonomy should be encouraged in you heart. Attending a university with a top-tier reputation often is an arduous but rewarding process.So,let's work harder and harder.