托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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Yes, perseverance makes people stronger. For example, if you keep doing exercise many years you will have a strong body, or if you keep learning English many years, you will become an English expert. All of us know Tangseng who had gone to India for Buddhist scriptures. He had spent many years to reached India to learned Buddhist scriptures and returned to the motherland. Although his western journey was very hard and dangerous, he still keeps moving, no gave up and finally succeeded. Another story is about me, about five years ago I started my yoga class which made my body more flexible and corrected my spine deformity. If Tangseng had not insisted on his western journey that can not get the great Buddhist scriptures, if I gave up my yoga class quickly, maybe my spine becomes worse than five years ago. The two of stories proved that perseverance makes people stronger, so when you want to do anything, just keep it.