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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8971
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分88.0分
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

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As is ironically shown above,in front of a pile of so-called “famous brand”fake leather shoes and under a signboard of “honest dealer”stands a business man asking an old man “what are you looking for”,with a reply from the old man ----honesty(with the old man replying that I am looking for honesty.)There has been a heated discussion about this kind of pictures in the newspaper.Simple as the picture is ,it does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon. The picture tells us that the credibility remains to be integral and indispensable part in our society,especially in the commercial worlds.Nowadays,individuals,enterprises and organizations do attach due attention to this issue.By gaining credibility,people and organizations can make money,take profit and even obtain wealth.With credibility and sincerity,not only can they accumulate wealth,but will also establish their careers,fit into society and finally attain social status.Honesty can promote communication,eliminate barriers and bridge gaps between people,What’s more,were there no credibility in our society,never could we survive the fierce competition in the age of globalization. As a consequence,honesty is not something that we can afford to lose or leave it at large.It is imperative that corresponding regulations and mechanisms with the joint efforts of the media should be introduced and enforced to promote honesty by authorities.The awareness of honesty should be enhanced,which will lead us to make every effort to keep promise and boycott fakes which are shown in the picture. Only in a reasonable,prosperous,health atmosphere can we avoid the scene in the cartoon and witness the ideal scene which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.

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