教育部——the Ministry of Education
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Today, my topic of this speach is sports. Do you always do sports in free time,or just because too much homework nakes you have no time to do sports? Recently,The Ministry of Education holds a activity named a National Student Sports Program, the time is on April 29th, form 10 to 11, and the Ministy of Education tells us that: do sports one ohour everyday, makes you healthy work for 50 yours,and you will always live in a happy life. Why we do this subject? Because some of our students in Gread 3 wion't do sports because of doing parperation of the university enterence exam. But I think, if you don't have a healthy body, it is no use for us to come into the best university. So,in my opinion, it is necessary for our Senior High school to do more sports. That is the best way to help us live in a happy live, and it is Beneficial harmless for us, too.