教育部——the Ministry of Education
恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
Today, my topic of this speech is about sport. Do you always do sports in free time,or just because too much homework nakes you have no time to do sports? Recently,The Ministry of Education holds a activity named a National Student Sports Program, the time is on April 29th, form 10 to 11, and the Ministy of Education tells us that: do sports one hour every day, makes you healthy work for 50 yours,and you will always live in a happy life. Why we do this subject? Because some of our students in Gread 3 wion't do sports because of doing preparation of the university entrance exam. But I think, if you don't have a healthy body, it is no use for us to come into the best university. So,in my opinion, it is necessary for our Senior High school to do more sports. That is the best way to help us live in a happy live, and it is Beneficial harmless for us, too.