2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

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As we can see from the picture, people work and associate through the Internet. Computers connect us together even though we are in distance in the world like a spider web. It intended to show that Internet makes it convenient of our daily life,however,it tempts us conddict too deep in it to be out in a way,which is its obviouslest deficiency. People prefer to communicate on the net to talk face to face. Undoubtfully,mankind in modern world can not keep himself from the internet that influents our life largely. Intelligent equipment was first invented to convenient our life not to control our mind.But many people who depend on intelligent equipment especially mobile phone would feel uncomfortable even anxious if their phone was not be with them.They check their phone time by time to make sure there is no new message.They are fond to chat by software nonetheless they sit side by side,ext.In the meantime,we sacrifice a lot,such as time and soul communications,eye health and so on,all of which are gracious to us. It is time to take measures to stop!First of all,we should improve our awareness of which most of time we spend on the internet is meaningless.Besides to control our life and not to be controlled.Many activities we can participate instead of surfing the internet.Last but not least,spend more time and energy to company with our friends and families.