单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
The of our school is having an activity named "protect environment as we can". I should write some words for it. I have three suggestions for it. First, we should use less water and recycle water as much as we can. Except for use the water that had washed clothes to water the flowers.