作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
The newspaper of our school is having an activity named "protect environment as we can". I should write some words for it. I have three suggestions for it. First, we should use less water and recycle water as much as we can. Except for use the water that had washed clothes to water the flowers.