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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
The Weekly English of our school is having an activity named "protect environment as we can". I should write some words for it. I have three suggestions for it. First, we should use less water and recycle water as much as we can. Except for use the water that had washed clothes to water the flowers. Secsond, we should throw the rubbish to the rubbish bin especially the berries.
