作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
The Weekly English of our school is having an activity named "protect environment as we can". I should write some words for it. I have three suggestions for it. First, we should use less water and recycle water as much as we can. Except for use the water that had washed clothes to water the flowers. Second, we should throw the rubbish to the rubbish bin especially the berries.