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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦156:保护环境从我做起

发布时间:2015-08-28 16:11浏览次数:1762
要求:
根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词
的短文,所给英文提示词语供选用,请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
你们学校《英语周报》正在开展“保护环境从我做起”的征文活动。请写一篇介绍自己如何从小事做起保护环境的短文。内容包括:你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。
提示词语: protect, instead, recycled, duty, environment, simplest, activities, suggest , become 
用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

The Weekly English of our school is having an activity named "protect environment as we can". I should write some words for it. I have three suggestions for it. First, we should use less water and recycle water as much as we can. Except for use the water that had washed clothes to water the flowers. Second, we should throw the rubbish to the rubbish bin especially the berries. They are harmful to the environment. Third, we can plant some plants. They are good for environment. Although you don't have a green thumb, you can also try it because it is interesting. And they are also very lovely, aren't they? All in all, we have only an Earth and it is getting worse and worse. We must protect environment as we can, then the Earth will become more beautiful.

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