作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
The Weekly English of our school is having an activity named "protect environment as we can". I should write some words for it. I have three suggestions for it. First, we should use less water and recycle water as much as we can. Except for use the water that had washed clothes to water the flowers. Second, we should throw the rubbish to the rubbish bin especially the berries. They are harmful to the environment. Third, we can plant some plants. They are good for environment. Although you don't have a green thumb, you can also try it because it is interesting. And they are also very lovely, aren't they? All in all, we have only an Earth and it is getting worse and worse. We must protect environment as we can, then the Earth will become more beautiful.