高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

衔接成分偏少；从句使用量太少；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真。

These days,I came back my home town.I was surprised at the big change of my home town. In the past,there were plenty of trees around the town.Fishes could swim in the clear river happlily. The houses were small and the streets weren't wide.People here were poor. Nowaday,many high buildings and factorise are built in my home town.Lots of cars run on the raod.The environment becomes worse and worse.Trees are cut down by people.Many fishes are dead because of the polluted river. Everyone,don't wait,let's do something for the environment!