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高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:17浏览次数:4118
要求:
假如你是李华。你的美国笔友  即将随其父母来中国,并在中国度过中秋节。他来信向你询问有关中秋节的习俗,请你告诉他有关中秋节的习俗。
要点如下:
1历史悠久。
2 中国人独有的传统节日。 
3 家庭团圆。
4 共进晚餐。 
5 吃月饼。 
6 赏月。
要求: 
1 词数100左右。
2 可适当添加细节。
3 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用高级词汇;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。

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Why does New Balance own so many celebrity fans In recent years, New Balance is more and more popular .A sinificant reason behind is that it has many celebrities fans in history .Then why do so many people are crazy for New Balance? New Balance, one of the world's major sports footwear manufacturers, whose full name is New Balance Athletic Shoe, Inc.. Founded in 1906 in Boston, USA, it was known as the "President jogging shoes" .It not only captures the heart of several presidents of the United States, such as Barack Obama, William Clinton, Ronald Reagan, etc. It also wins the favor of many famous stars, such as the godfather of iPhone:Steve Jobs, American comedian Bill Hader, singer Joel Madden, actress Emma Roberts etc. It is not only popular in the United States but also sweeps across Asia, such as South Korean star Jong-ki Song,the Chinese star Chow Yun Fat, Leslie Cheung ,Jet Ii,etc. Although New Balance has massive celebrity fans, it never pays stars for advertisements .Being well-known for its specialty, it extremely values United States -manufacturing spirit, which pushes its workers to make a pair of shoes as the same with to building a luxury carve. With great originality, New Balance attaches great importance to the traditional craft as well as the technology. Besides, its design is awfully people-oriented, providing the same size with different width in order to provide every consumer with the most comfortable shoes, which attributes to satisfy the consumers. Comparing With strong competitors such as Adidas, Nike, New Balance is unique to brand strategy whose logo is building civilian hero, With the word of mouth marketing strategy, New Balance depends on the ordinary consumers advertise for shoes rather than the famous stars ,which not only help save mass of endorsements but also wins the public’s loyalty. So, go and buy a pair of New Balance, then you can be a hero too!

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