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As the development of the social,knowledge become more and more important. we have many knowledge to remnenber. So its useful and necessary to discuss learing habies. I think interesing is the best way to study. They are many students study hard but learn english words slowly,because they think english words abstract and uninteresting. In fact we can chang our habies. For example,we can turn english prononce into chinese pronouce and turn into what you intersted in. A good habies make a good grogress,we should learning a good habies.