采用了一些简单的从句;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且要加强拼写检查。
As the development of the social,knowledge become more and more important. We have much knowledge to remnenber. So its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. I think interesting is the best way to study. They are many students study hard but learn English words slowly,because they think english words abstract and uninteresting. In fact we can chang our habits. For example,we can turn English pronouce into Chinese pronouce and turn into what you intersted in. A good habits make a good grogress,we should learning a good habits.