可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
With the development of the social,knowledge is becoming more and more important. We have much knowledge to remember. So its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. I think interesting is the best way to study. They are many students study hard but learn English words slowly,because they think english words abstract and uninteresting. In fact we can chang our habits. For example,we can turn English pronouce into Chinese pronouce and turn into what you intersted in. A good habits make a good grogress,we should learning a good habits.