作者词汇表达不够多样,希望能多使用高级词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
With the development of the social,knowledge is becoming more and more important. We have much knowledge to remember. So it’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. I think interesting is the best way to study. They are many students study hard but learn English words slowly,because they think English words abstract and uninteresting. In fact we can chang our habits. For example,we can turn English pronounce into Chinese pronounce and turn into what you interested in. Good habits make good grogress,we should learning a good habits.