文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
With the development of the social,knowledge is becoming more and more important. We have much knowledge to remember. So it’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. I think interesting is the best way to study. They are many students study hard but learn English words slowly,because they think English words abstract and uninteresting. In fact we can chang our habits. For example,we can turn English pronounce into Chinese pronounce and turn into what you interested in. Good learning habits can make our study go to succeed,we should learning a good habits.