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小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:32浏览次数:7162
要求:
描述我的新老师。
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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作者词汇基本功很好,一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,不过要注意词汇拼写的检查;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Why choose iPhone5s case? If you purchase iPhone5s, there is no doubt that you wanna buy a beautiful case too. IPhone5s case is absolutely the optimal choice. Now I am going to show you why I recommend iPhone5s case. Firstly, the most distinguishing characteristics of iPhone5s case lies in its high-qualified leather and meticulous craft, setting off the high level of iPhone5s. Secondly, its surface is so smooth that you will distinctly feel soft when you touch it, which is conducive to the relief of your discomfort. Besides, in order to cater to different tastes of different customers, iPhone5s case furnishes us with various colors, including yellow, pink, blue, brown, black and red. You can select whatever color you like. In addition, the case is extremely light so that you nearly feel the burden. Isn’t that amazing? Another superiority of IPhone5s case is its horned design, which solves the problem of rigidity perfectly. Finally, let’s discuss the case’s interior design. Unlike the fuselage, the inside of iPhone5s uses a "Microfiber-lined" material, which contributes to fitting well and reduces the frictions. Nevertheless, nothing is perfect, so is the iPhone5s case. The only inferiority of it is that the light-color case is too easy to become dirty. But I consider it can be overwhelmed by its remarkable advantages. By the way, I would like to give you some suggestions on how to maintain the iPhone5s 5s case effectively. The first thing you need to take it down from iPhone5s 5s slowly in case of the damage of the phone itself. Next, choosing the right cleanser is another important issue. You had better use the wet velvet pile cloth to wipe the case. Do remember not to use the window cleaners, household cleaners, aerosol sprays, solvents, alcohol, ammonia or abrasive to clean it. Last but not least, don’t forget to keep the case away from the strong light, heat, moisture.

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