高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真；采用了一些简单的从句。

My hometown History, my hometown was a small county with green trees surrouding, clean stream with fish happily swimming in it; simple and crude houses along with narrow streets, people works with a poor living. But now, skyscripers are standing up, all kinds of cars are running in the streets. Developing industry make environment worse. Tress are decreasing and fish are disappeared, and pollution control becomes the urgent tak.