文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;结构良好,但是语言不流畅;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
My hometown History, my hometown was a small county with green trees surrounding, clean creek with fish happily swimming in it; simple and crude houses and narrow streets, people works in a poor living. But now, skyscrapers are standing up, many of big and small cars are running in the streets. Developing industry make environment worse. Trees are decreasing and fishes are disappeared, and pollution control becomes the urgent task.