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My hometown History, my hometown was a small county with green trees surrounding, clean creek with fish happily swimming in it; simple and crude houses and narrow streets, people works in a poor living. But now, skyscrapers are standing up, many of big and small cars are running in the streets. Developing industry make environment worse. Trees are decreasing and fishes are vanlished, and pollution control becomes the first important task.