2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Air pollution With the industralization city developing rapdily,the air pollution of many cities around the world have been more and more seriously. The damages from air pollution have an bad influence on human beings ,the damages mainly contain three ideas.Firstly,there is not cleaning air for us to breath any more,the polluted air contains too much substance which will hurt our body if we take in.Secondly,the unclear air damages plants as well.Thirdly,air pollution results in increasing CO2,as a result,the earth becomes hoter and hoter. The solution to the air pollution problem has so many,for example,we can go out by public transport rather than taking cars.Likewise,we decrease the number of papers we use,for preventing from cutting trees.The most importantly,we must turn pollutional way of developing ecnomic into green way,likely,the government cuts down the number of factories in scale.