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dear john, thank you for your invition.i like the dinner which your mother cook,it taste dilicious! but i have no time to go your home to have a dinner, i am sorry.because i have a important exam the day after tomorrow,i must busy in preparig in it.i want to get a good mark and i want to make my parents happy.so i should stay at home. there are many opportunitions that having dinner with your family at your home,i looking forward to having dinner with you next time! in a words,i wish you have a good time with your family! best wish, li hua.