高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用偏少；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

In the past, my homwtown was surrounded by trees; the fish swam freely in clear river; the houses were shabby and the streets were narrow. But nowadays: the buildings is standing everywhere; the cars are running on the streets; since the development of industry, the enviroment is getting bad and the trees is decreasing, fish is disappearing; it is high time to delt with enviroment pollution.