小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；衔接成分偏少；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用。

I have a good mother,she likes my friend.she with a short hair ,she has black skin,but she is very pretty.she is good at cooking,the food is very delicious ,I thing she can be a good cook I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.