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Dear John, Thank you for your invitation.I like the dinner which your mother cook,it tastes delicious! But i have no time to go your home to have a dinner, i am sorry.Because i have an important exam the day after tomorrow,i must busy in preparing in it.I want to get a good mark and i want to make my parents happy.So i should stay at home. There are many opportunitions that having dinner with your family at your home,i looking forward to having dinner with you next time! In words,i wish you have a good time with your family! best wishes, Li Hua.