小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

I shouldn't get in such low grate If you can plug away at your work,you will succeed.I really want to get off to a good start at my new work.I wouldn't be caught dead in that ugly outfit in the new school.Soup up your car please,the freshman orientation starts at 9 o'clock.I came to school to register at the eleventh hour