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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇；从句使用偏少。
Because of the frequent human activities , like deforestations and over farming , lot of the living animals and plants are seriously affected ; Although some people claim that nothing could be done to save these creatures , still believe that things are going to alter if come positive measures are taken ; admittedly , the earth is adversed influenced by various kinds of mankind behaviors ; Over gazing leads to land with not fertilization ; deforestations result in the disappearance of rare species ; huntings have driven animals ,especially the wildlife to extinctions ; all these seem to be so impressing that people feel that there is nothing human can do to prevent this from happening ; no wonder people think that it's too late to take actions ; however , is it true that human can hardly do anything to make a difference ? the answer is we definitely can come up with some positive solutions to this issue; firstly , farmers and companies are encouraged to explore some sustainable practices in cultivating plants rather than simply gazing wildly ; Then , strict punishments should be declared for those who cut down trees for personal sake ; in addition , governments should impose some rigid laws on wildlife protections so that people dare not hunt animals for profits ; with all these measures , the living environment of animals and plants will be improved dramatically and thus the earth is to be saved; to conclude , even though the earth has been and still would be affected by various kinds of human's negative behaviors , it's never too late to take some positive actions ;
