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Some people think all children learn history in school is important. Some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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People have various opinions on the question that whether children should learn history at schools or they should learn something more useful; personally , think it is necessary to have a all rounded development ; That is , they should be cultivated in the areas of both history and other disciplines like language and science ; on one hand , learning history can produce positive impact on children ; by knowing about the historical events , children are excepted to distinguish the wrongness and rightness ,which helps them form upright characters ; also , through listening to the stories in past , kids will be taught to analyze them and thus enhancing the analytical ability and critical thinking skills ;moreover , history will nurture children' appreciation to the ancients and guide them to learn the wisdom from the ancient people ; history is the subject that every child should take it for serious; on the other hand , there are also many other subjects that deserve attention ; because these subjects make contributions to children's full development , which get them well prepared for their career ; Maths teaches them think with subtitle manners ; language makes them understand and communicate with one another ; art and music trigger their imagination and creativity ; all subjects have indispensable impact on children's development ; so , supports should be given on these subjects , to conclude , in order to achieve a balanced development, schools try make their efforts to promote education in both area of history and other disciplines ; only by doing this can kids benefit a lot from teh education ,
