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Dear fred, I am so glad to receive your letter.You want toknow what I like to do after the exam.Now let me tell you about it. You can’t imagine how happy I am! At first, I will have a good sleep because I often stayed up in the past two months. Next, I am going to watch TV. I like playing basketball very much, so I will enjoy some basketball matches on it. I will also go to the bookstore and buy a few interesting books so that I can spend a good summer vacation. How about you? Please write to me soon. yours, David
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