文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
The new semester is coming soon, I am told we have a new English teacher.i saw a beautiful lady with long hair today,My friend told me that she is my new English teacher!wow!I thing she will be a good teacher,because she looks very kind and very patience.My friend like her ,too.I can't wait to see her again.