文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
Seeing is believing? As we all known, many people only believe what he hear and what he see to have a conclusion. I think it's not wise. Here are my views. Firstly, what we see always are not the deep. Such as ad. We can see it at anywhere, but we must known that it always no true. Many people fall into the trap, and demage much money, even their health. So do not only believe what you see. Secondly, when you are in anger, what you see must be wrong. At the moment, you should not put you bad mood to business, otherwise you will lost your aware of many thing, and make wrong decision. Thirdly, there are many chest in the society, we can see the news said that some people have been chest due to them believe someone saying. Last but not least, we should have our own
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