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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11035
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
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作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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Why Curry likes Under Armour Stephen Curry, a popular player in NBA, whose fans will be curious about what kind of sneakers he likes. His favorite is Under Armour! Now I am going to tell you why Curry has a special taste for it? Being well-known as a high-end functional sportswear brand, with a "making the sportswear stronger”, Under Armour adheres to design the products with passion and innovation, providing the activists with the full range of sports equipment, including clothing, shoes and accessories. There are three big series of products in Under Armour, such as Foot Gear, Cold Gear, Heat Gear. Among them, Heat Gear and Cold Gear is designed with a kind of revolutionary fabric that specifically for all kinds of climate, which can help the athletes be an optimal statute even in a harsh environment. In addition, Foot Gear has a mass of technological innovation especially the elastic chassis technology and the air cushion technology. That’s to say, Heat Gear and Cold Gear mean to protect our products from cold and heat. In addition, it also has All Season Gear, Loose Gear, and so on. Next I am going to show you the advantages of Under Armour. Firstly, with the high-qualified craft, this brand mainly focuses on the professional line. Comparing with Nike, it is only slightly more expensive. Secondly, Its Brand slogan is "Cotton is our enemy." All its products are made of nylon, polyester and its design style is extremely concise. Originated from college football, thus it gets a high popularity among young people. Recently It has given the priority to the color, which caters to the female’ tastes. Last but not least, each corset has its unique scientific and technological craft with the breathable, quick-drying, comfortable characteristics, contributing to reducing the frictions and helping relax the muscles No wonder Curry likes Under Armour. It deserves it!

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