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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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Why does Curry like Under Armour? Stephen Curry, a popular player in NBA, whose fans are absolutely curious about what kind of sneaker he likes. His favorite is Under Armour! Now I am going to tell you why Curry has a special taste for it. Being well-known as a high-end functional sportswear brand, with a "Making the sportswear stronger”, Under Armour adheres to design the products with passion and innovation, providing the activists with the full range of sports equipment, including clothing, shoes and accessories. There are three big series of products in Under Armour, such as Foot Gear, Cold Gear, Heat Gear. Among them, Heat Gear and Cold Gear is designed with a kind of revolutionary fabric that specifically for all kinds of climate, which can help the athletes be an optimal statute even in a harsh environment. In addition, Foot Gear has a mass of technological innovation especially the elastic chassis technology and the air cushion technology. That’s to say, Heat Gear and Cold Gear mean to protect our products from cold and heat. In addition, it also has All Season Gear, Loose Gear, and so on. Next I am going to show you the advantages of Under Armour. Firstly, with the high-qualified craft, this brand mainly focuses on the professional line. Comparing with Nike, it is just slightly more expensive. Secondly, Its Brand slogan is "Cotton is our enemy." All its products are made of nylon, polyester and its design style is extremely concise. Originated from college football, thus it gets a high popularity among young people. Recently It has given priority to the color, which caters to the female’ tastes. Last but not least, each corset has its unique scientific and technological craft with the breathable, quick-drying, comfortable characteristics, contributing to reducing the frictions and helping relax the muscles. No wonder Curry likes Under Armour. It deserves it!

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